Your coat quivers beneath my touch,
Rosy gray and warm, yet cold.
A soft whicker stalls my tears
You know my every thought, my fears.
Piercing eyes that I know so well,
Smoky green tinged with burnished gold.
Horse and rider, while the suns rays burn,
Waiting, longingly for the day to turn;
For when the moon commands the sky,
On hooves he can no longer fly.
I find you once again my dear,
Sinewy muscles under bare skin,
A shift in shape and you appear,
Equine body reveals the man within.
Our love endures despite your fate,
I never let you leave my gaze,
Your wife, your lover, your mate
Forever, till the end of days.
January 13, 2011
spells out divinity with your soul mate in your poem.. thanks for sharing! here’s mine for this thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/
January 13, 2011
Powerful imagery and beautiful rhythm. Thanks for sharing in the Poets Rally.
January 14, 2011
sweet and brilliant..
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January 16, 2011
Beautifully written, sensual almost…
January 16, 2011
so sweet poem.. Here is mine, Through a Child Eyes
Someone is Special
January 16, 2011
this was like a ballad, Sarah.. a story in words 🙂 nicely written.
My Poet’s Rally – Myriad Is My Mind
January 16, 2011
Nice write, thank you! 🙂
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
January 17, 2011
Magnificent!
JP
http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/01/13/pieces/
January 17, 2011
Lovely. Sweetly romantic.
Thank you for this fine contribution to Rally. 🙂
January 19, 2011
Sweet; I like the imagination and dreaminess of this one.
http://danielandbonita.wordpress.com/2010/09/26/no-goodbyes/
January 19, 2011
Wow. Just wow. The power here is awe inspiring, I don’t believe I have read anything with more depth and desire than this. Great work!
January 24, 2011
It’s good to know that someone took the time to investigate this aspect, even though the conclusion don’t necessarily match my expectations.